Apply the theories of Du Bois and Durkheim to a scene from the movie Crush.

Please check and correct:
1. spelling and grammar
2. topic sentences
3. thesis sentence
4. flow of paper
5. tense through out paper
6. support of main points
7. introduction and conclusion
8. understanding of issue
9. transition from sentence to sentence
10. transition from paragraph to paragraph
11. any other problems that will improve paper

*Please have knowledge of Durkheim's theory of organic solidarity and Du Bois' theory of double consciousness.  Thank you.

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